Twigileia

Vision: This point of view is really great! The way she's slightly glancing at you while moving gives it a kind of casual feel.

Originality: I really like the magic trail to the moon The only thing I have to say is that it looks like she was looping a lot when the hair motions make it seem as if she was travelling straight. Writing something with the stars has been used before, but here, it looks way too obvious.

Technique: I reeeeeeeally love the hair! It looks awesome! It has a really flowy feel which is what you want when a pony is in motion. The hair placement doesn't really make sense though in terms of movement. It should be in back of her a bit. Also, the wings don't seem to be placed in a symmetrical manner. It's really hard because I have tried XD Also, there seems to be another light source besides the moon. Some parts are bright when there should be shadows.

Impact: The contrast in color really draws the eyes to the hair. Your pony anatomy is also really good. DId I mention I love the hair?